Tuesday, October 16, 2012
I Remember
I remember getting my first car the excitement i had the night before we went to pick it up, i couldn't sleep at all. I remember that day and pacing around my room waiting for the guy, from craiglist, to call and tell us he was home. I remember the drive home with the car and how excited i was to show all my friends my first car. I remember getting it home and asking my dad if i could drive to my friends to show them but he said no, only because the turn signals didnt work and the tittle had not been transfered yet. I remember ordering my stereo and how much of a pain it was to instal, I also remember the rush i had when i finally had put in everything i wanted into my car, the new stereo, the subwoofers, and the blue neon light. I remember the disappointment when i had to take the car into the shop and didnt get it back for 5 days and had to pay $700. I will always remember my first car...
Antagonist storys
Protagonist/antagonist
Story 1: John a pizza delivery guy, that absolutely hates his job and just wants to quit, has to take an order to someone who he absolutely hate. when he gets to this kids house he opens the pizza and just starts eating it, after about 10 minutes half the pizzas is gone and he gets out of his car to finally deliver the pizza. when he gets to the door the kid he hates say "i saw you eat that" and they fight to the death....
story 2: This kid just got his first car he is so excited that he finally has some freedom, everytime he goes to leave his car either will not start, runs out of gas half way their, or he gets a ticket. he finally gets the nerves to ask his dream girl to the movies, she says yes, he goes to get into his car and the car just wont start.
Story 1: John a pizza delivery guy, that absolutely hates his job and just wants to quit, has to take an order to someone who he absolutely hate. when he gets to this kids house he opens the pizza and just starts eating it, after about 10 minutes half the pizzas is gone and he gets out of his car to finally deliver the pizza. when he gets to the door the kid he hates say "i saw you eat that" and they fight to the death....
story 2: This kid just got his first car he is so excited that he finally has some freedom, everytime he goes to leave his car either will not start, runs out of gas half way their, or he gets a ticket. he finally gets the nerves to ask his dream girl to the movies, she says yes, he goes to get into his car and the car just wont start.
Wednesday, October 10, 2012
Antagonis Protagonist- jacob rosen
Screen treatment for protagonist antagonist....
Story- Kid finally gets his own car and he's finally free but every time he wants to go somewhere really important his car dies, runs out of gas, or just doesn't even start.
Scene 1:
Kid is walking towards a girl at school who happens to be his crush, while walking towards her he stops and thinks about walking away (he is nervous), walks up to this girl who he has a crush on and attempts to ask her to the movies, mumbling and stuttering. She says "yes i thought you'd never ask!" they plan for friday at 9pm and decide just to meet at the movies
Scene 2:
Kid runs up to his friend in complete excitement and amazement "dude she said yes!!!!" in shock his friend doesn't believe him at first. The kids friend says "this is your one chance don't screw up!"
Scene 3:
Shot of someone crossing off days on a calender and having friday circled with a bunch of smily faces and hearts on it...
Scene 4:
Kid is in his room deciding what to wear and trying on clothes, he looks at his watch and realizes he's running a couple minutes late and runs out, shot of him running to his car and getting in. He gets in his car and puts the key in ignition, turn key only to realize his car is not starting, after trying a couple more times he gets out of his car and takes of running......
Scene 5:
Kid makes it to date all sweaty and says to the girl "im ready." the girl then says "the movie started 10 minutes ago" slaps the kid and walks away
Scene 6:
couple weeks later.....Kid is on the phone with his friend talking about going to get the new call of duty at midnight, both kids agree to meet up at the store at midnight, the kid goes gets into his car and starts to drive.....about half way down the street he runs out of gas and decides to just push the rest of the way.....
Scene 7:
kid gets a call that tells him that his grandpa is in the hospital he gets up from watching tv and sprints out to his car he goes to turn it on and again it doesnt start, almost in tears he keeps trying but no luck, he gets out walks to the front of the car and collapses on the hood banging on it asking "why me?" the car starts....
Story- Kid finally gets his own car and he's finally free but every time he wants to go somewhere really important his car dies, runs out of gas, or just doesn't even start.
Scene 1:
Kid is walking towards a girl at school who happens to be his crush, while walking towards her he stops and thinks about walking away (he is nervous), walks up to this girl who he has a crush on and attempts to ask her to the movies, mumbling and stuttering. She says "yes i thought you'd never ask!" they plan for friday at 9pm and decide just to meet at the movies
Scene 2:
Kid runs up to his friend in complete excitement and amazement "dude she said yes!!!!" in shock his friend doesn't believe him at first. The kids friend says "this is your one chance don't screw up!"
Scene 3:
Shot of someone crossing off days on a calender and having friday circled with a bunch of smily faces and hearts on it...
Scene 4:
Kid is in his room deciding what to wear and trying on clothes, he looks at his watch and realizes he's running a couple minutes late and runs out, shot of him running to his car and getting in. He gets in his car and puts the key in ignition, turn key only to realize his car is not starting, after trying a couple more times he gets out of his car and takes of running......
Scene 5:
Kid makes it to date all sweaty and says to the girl "im ready." the girl then says "the movie started 10 minutes ago" slaps the kid and walks away
Scene 6:
couple weeks later.....Kid is on the phone with his friend talking about going to get the new call of duty at midnight, both kids agree to meet up at the store at midnight, the kid goes gets into his car and starts to drive.....about half way down the street he runs out of gas and decides to just push the rest of the way.....
Scene 7:
kid gets a call that tells him that his grandpa is in the hospital he gets up from watching tv and sprints out to his car he goes to turn it on and again it doesnt start, almost in tears he keeps trying but no luck, he gets out walks to the front of the car and collapses on the hood banging on it asking "why me?" the car starts....
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